her words purred on walls

Poetry by silent lotus, Nov 9, 2022.

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  1. silent lotus

    silent lotus Well-Known Member

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    silent lotus, Nov 9, 2022
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  2. Jay Dougherty

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    Jay Dougherty, Nov 9, 2022
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  3. silent lotus

    silent lotus Well-Known Member

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  4. Julie A. Dickson

    Julie A. Dickson Well-Known Member

    [can hear my cats purring for this one.....purrrrrr]
     
    Julie A. Dickson, Nov 10, 2022
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  5. Tom Strong

    Tom Strong Active Member

    I like the sonics in s2. For s1 I wanna keep reading it as "from" instead of "on". The purring in my mind seems like its coming through the wall not from its surface. But that's just me, if this purring is graffiti or artwork on a wall then "on" makes more sense. .
     
    Tom Strong, Nov 10, 2022
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