Caterpillar of Yellow

Poetry by Julie A. Dickson, Nov 17, 2022.

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  1. Julie A. Dickson

    Julie A. Dickson Well-Known Member

    Caterpillar of Yellow


    Caterpillar of yellow, a debonair fellow
    crawls as inchworm up thistle and vine
    Prefers yellow hue, and if I was you
    I’d tell him he’s decked out quite fine

    Stylin’ I’d say, you’d best back away
    and let him get on with his task
    Interrupt nature; don't try to assuage here
    he’ll tell you his plan if you ask

    Munching on flower, alone by the hour
    blend in like a camouflaged bird
    Once eaten his fill, he’ll be stayin' until -
    on his way with nary a word

    What’s that you claim, you know his true name?
    Acronicta Americana in books
    Such a fuzzy guy, soon after he’ll fly
    once in branches his cocoon is hooked

    Then after a time, while attached to the vine
    miraculous change to occur
    Emerge as from cloth, a young dagger moth
    spreading his wings, flies away in a blur



    Julie A. Dickson
    Previously published in the Poet’s Touchstone
     
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  2. Michael Ashley

    Michael Ashley Well-Known Member

    Nice Julie!

    lovely sounding piece

    I was playing with the last stanza to balance the meter a little. Also off plays nicely with moth instead of away in the final stanza.

    Then after a time, while attached to the vine
    miraculous changes occur
    Emerge as from cloth, a young dagger moth
    spreads his wings, and flies off in a blur

    Mike
     

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