Italian

Poetry by Daniel J. Flore III, Nov 22, 2022.

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  1. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    she puts on this
    Italian music

    old scratchy
    tunes

    from a concave
    moon

    over Venice canals
    melting into the water

    and
    into my old country
    dreams
     
    Last edited: Nov 23, 2022
    Daniel J. Flore III, Nov 22, 2022
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  2. Julie A. Dickson

    Julie A. Dickson Well-Known Member

    Love this, Dan.
    Seems as though ending with "melting into the water" would  be a great finish...
     
    Julie A. Dickson, Nov 23, 2022
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  3. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    Thank you. Might be a good suggestion. Appreciate that.
     
    Daniel J. Flore III, Nov 23, 2022
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  4. silent lotus

    silent lotus Well-Known Member

    ~


    Italian

    she puts on this
    Italian music
    old scratchy
    tunes
    from a concave
    moon
    over Venice
    melting into the canals
    and my old country
    .....d
    >r
    e
    >a
    .....m
    >>>>s

    ~
     
    silent lotus, Dec 4, 2022
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