Though they grit their teeth all the while while they hate their own sound sound for the sake of echoes they hear hear
Thanks. This is a personal favorite from my younger years. Sometime something like this comes out, and you just know you couldn't do it again.
dear Jay which came first the photo or the the distant mountain whisper ? a warm smile silent lotus `
Ha. The photo I pulled from unsplash just yesterday. The poem is old, quite old. It appeared in my master's "creative" thesis.
Took me a while to warm up to this but once I did I really like it too, especially how the poem and picture collaborate. The image of the person and the fading reverberations of the background "echo" like the person in the poem. Also, if this is an actual photo, unmodified, it's very cool. There's the way JZ can make her art so realistic it looks like a photo and then there's this, a photo that looks like it could be a painting. That is good camera work.
dear Julie yes ,, and since the title is with Men i wondered how it would sound in a woman's voice silent lotus `
