some evening in March at the coffee shop

Poetry by Lance Watson, Nov 8, 2022.

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  1. Lance Watson

    Lance Watson New Member

    "yeah, i don't know why they don't
    legalize this stuff," karsten said.

    i watched the thick plume of smoke
    snake up out of his joint
    and collect at the top of the ceiling

    "yeah," i said

    "it's like, can you imagine
    if they made alcohol illegal
    again
    like they should, cuz the stuff is
    way more lethal
    than weed"

    "it is," i said.
    "i even hate being around people
    who drink alcohol."

    "they're scary," i said

    "they are," karstens added

    "plus they destroy other people's
    lives with their shit," i said

    "yeah," he said

    "pass me that joint," i said

    "here you go," he said

    i inhaled
    leaned back
    looked out the window
    at a tiny wisp of smoke
    coming out of the chimney
    of the building across the street

    "i forgot what we were
    talking about," karstens said

    "it's okay," i said
    "i did, too"
     
  2. silent lotus

    silent lotus Well-Known Member

    dear LW

    i like the ending
    it reminds me of your December 23, 2021 poem


    Woman arrested for selling adult toys at Santa gathering

    inkwell smiles
    silent lotus

    `
     
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  3. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    Lol. Good poem.
     
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  4. Mike Casetta

    Mike Casetta Active Member

    Much enjoyed Lance. Couldn't agree more with the social commentary! Well written & good dialogue.
     
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  5. Lance Watson

    Lance Watson New Member

    thank you! this was written at coffeeshop johnny in amsterdam.

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    i used to meet in the morning there with a math student from france. we'd share a coffee and a smoke and have great conversations! and he became "karstens" in a series of poems i wrote.
     
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