MY BOOK COSTS 7 BUCKS

Poetry by Daniel J. Flore III, Nov 8, 2022.

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  1. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    MY BOOK COSTS 7 BUCKS

    my brain matter is worth 7 bucks
    read me on kindle and I’m worth even less
    my frustration is fourteen cents prolly
    my longing is a bright new shiny penny
    the love in the book is free
    buy me cheap
    I’m a cheap bastard
    I’ll take your 7 bucks
    and give you poetry that
    looks like satan vomiting
    through my nostrils
    and Jesus
    cleaning up the mess
     
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  2. Daniel J. Flore III

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  3. Julie A. Dickson

    Julie A. Dickson Well-Known Member

    Nice start to this one, Dan...it drew me in.

    my brain matter is worth 7 bucks
    read me on kindle and I’m worth even less
     
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  4. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    Thank you.
     
  5. Jay Dougherty

    Jay Dougherty Likes Ice Cream

    I like the end quite a bit, almost more than everything before.

    How about this:

    MY BOOK COSTS 7 BUCKS

    buy me cheap
    I’m a cheap bastard
    I’ll take your 7 bucks
    and give you poetry that
    looks like satan vomiting
    through my nostrils
    and Jesus
    cleaning up the mess
     
    Daniel J. Flore III likes this.
  6. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    Interesting idea Jay. Thanks and thanks for the feature!
     
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